Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my writing. We are learning to use my six senses to describe, characters, places, feelings etc. Build a strong picture in our readers head Use strong ideas when writing.
Here is my Writing.
‘I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black. I am chilling on the couch. When the room was pitch black. When I was home alone on the couch the power went out and clown was banging on my wall and door. I feel scared when someone was banging the wall and the door. I was touching my bed when I was under the blankets. I can touch with my hands my blankets. I am in my house alone. I was forbidden to go outside. I was Hesitant to open the door. I was Unfocused because of the clown. The clown face was Fascinating. And then I went to going and open the door and it was just my brother and my mum doing that noise.
THE END!!!!!!
And the word I had to us.
Words that you must include:
Chilling
Forbidden
Hesitant
Unfocused
Fascinating
Thank you for reading my blog post. Can you please comment on it? Have a great day at school or at home. Bye!!!!!!!!!!