Hi Everyone,
I am sharing my writing. I am learning to know what language features are and how to use them.
This is my writing about a mountain.
Snow - excitement - Happy,cold. Fast Falling snow.
Tress - The strong wind shaking the branches
People - talking, clod Excited.
Strong wind-power strength waving, swinging, shaking.
Ice - loneliness
The strong wind was shaking the branches whooshing, roaring around the mountain. The snow was fast falling snow like excitement it was Happy,cold. The storing wind was power strength waving, swinging, shaking.
I hope you like it.
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