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Wednesday, 19 September 2018

Maui and the giant fish

W. A. L. T visualiuse to help me keep track and retell what I  have read. 

Hi my legend is Maui and the giant fish my story is about  Maui  wants to go fishing with his bother but his bother said no. secretly Maui planned a way to show his brother that he could be a great  fisherman. 

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3 comments:

  1. Zoe19 September 2018 at 09:38

    Hi Olivia my name is Zoe from Wigram primary school I really like the way you used shapes to make the fish maybe next time you could colour your girl.I remembered the time when we made Maui in my Chromebook it was really hard but in the end it was really good Keep up the good work.

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  2. Faye19 September 2018 at 09:38

    Hi Olivia my name is Faye I am from Wigram Primary school and I really like the drawing. Maybe next time you could add a background like an ocean background or maybe you could add more color to it. This reminds me when my class made fish drawings with our hands keep up the good work.

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  3. Olivia19 September 2018 at 09:45

    thank you but it was a boy not a girl

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