Today for reading we are learning to put important in are words for Armistice day
this is paragraph i read about Armistice day
"At 11am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
this is how i re-wrote the paragraph in my own words
On the 11 of November 2018 new Zealand made a centenary
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