Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my Week 6 Hotspot Doc. We are learning to do write your own story inspired by this picture.
Here it is.
Week 6
Write your own story inspired by this picture.
- Re-read once and highlight your descriptive sentences blue.
- Re-read again and highlight your strongest vocabulary yellow.
- Re-read again and check your full stops and capitals.
17 - 9 - 19
Once a upon a time there was a Mountain and there was snow on it. And then we came out and I was shooting at the bad guy . When I shoot my gun came out with fire ‘BANG BANG’ . And the other good guy didn't have fire coming out of it.
I hope you my it.
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