Hi Everyone,
Today for this blog post I am going to tell you about amazing hotspot writing!
In our writing there is a instruction that says " Finish the table below by describing each of the telling sentences". Everyone one in our class has to take turn the telling sentence into a showing sentence!
Here is my work I have been doing this week and I think last week as will.
Week 2
Finish the table below by describing each of the ‘Telling’ sentences.
SHOW
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Don’t Tell
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Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.
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Brian was angry. He started to yell.
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An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.
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Johnny felt sad.
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Bailey was smiling so hard and her teeth fill out of her mouth.
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Bailey was happy.
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Jeremy’s widened eyes grew bigger and bigger as he got shocked in his test.
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Jeremy was shocked.
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Tama was jumping around in his afternoon match as his legs hurt.
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Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.
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I hope you like it.
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