My Collaborative Writing

Hi Everyone,

I am going to talk about my Collaborative writing. Today I am going to showing you what I have been doing for writing. So we have been describing this video, here is the  link to it. I have finished it and I hope you like it 

So here it is my writing.

I am a  7 year old girl

I can hear

•    I am an 800 meter track race. I stand at the starting line, getting ready for the 800 meter long  distance race. 

• The audience cheering The audience was cheering at the kids when they are running.

• The people's feet were behind me - pattering, lightly thudding

  

•  The guides in the high- vis jackets telling me where to stand
• gutted guy moved me

 I am an 800 meter truck race. I stand at the starting line, getting ready for the 800 meter long  distance race. The gutted guy moved me somewhere else I didn’t what to but I did. I darted form the starting line like a lightning bolt. The audience was cheering at the kids when they are running. The people ‘s feet was behind me making a loud noise.

I hope you like my writing.

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