Hi Everybody,
Today I am going to talk about my amazing weekend. So on Friday I ask my Mum if I can go to my cousin house and she said yes and before the I said can we go to Hammer Springs again and she said no. And then I said can I go to my cousin house and she said yes and in the morning on Saturday I said can I stay the night and do you know what she said she said yes.
When I was got there I play some fortnight with my cousin call Emily and my other cousin name is Toby and he might be playing fortnite as well. So if he is playing it I am not.
And then I went home.
And then I went home.
And I have Toby and sat chat and Emily I can text them on sat chat.
Thank you for reading my blog post. Can you please comment on it. Have a great day at school or home. Bye!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about your weekend this morning. Thank you for showing it to me. I didn't know that you could play fortnight and that you had two cousins! I like how you are using talking ( dialouge) in your writing. A next step that you could work on is to put the words someone is saying in speech marks, like this: And then I said "can I go to my cousin house" and she said "yes".
Keep up the awesome blogging,
Miss D
Thank you miss D i can play fortnight. it is very easy miss D bye have a great day. :( :) (:)
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