Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to talk about my writing. We are writing in 5
minute and if we stop we have to try again. This is what we are learning to do Be fluent writers Know what writing fluency feels like. Here is the link to it if you want to try it My link .
Here it is my Writing.
As he opened the car door, there was a loud noise. It was a big dog and he went to go and sit down he siad wait the dog was barking at the man called Issac. And then we had to take the dog to the vet because Issac sat on it and the dog was sitting at the front of Issac had to sit at the back with me.
The End!!!!!!!
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