Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my writing. Use strong ideas when writing.Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words.Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
So here is my Writing.
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me. I stop walking. I move over and then the car went. The blustery wind blows. I felt Disillusioned and fragile. The rain in the light was exquisite.
Thank you for reading my blog post. Can you please comment on it? Have a great day at school or at home. Bye!!!!!!!!!!
No comments:
Post a Comment
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.