Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to talk about on Friday. On Friday I didn't have to go to school because my Mum was sick and she said we are not going to nelson anymore and at lunch time she said we are going to nelson. We stared to get ready to go.
On Friday
We got to Richmond at 5:20 or 5:10. We stay at a Cameron Park. I say in a tent um stay in a Cameron. But when we got there we went to a friends house in stoke. And I took same video off me and him called Jack. and then on Saturday I went to a another friends house chis house not in Nelson. And Mum keep say do I like Jake back I don't I think he like me because he keep look at me and ask me a lot of questions. And we went to buy lollies. With Jack, Me and Cody.
On Saturday
And then we came back on Sunday as well.
On Sunday
I went back to there house I got a frozen Coke. I know who got one Cody, Jack and Me.
For breakfast we had McDonald for 2 days.
On Monday
Going back to Chch. It was very fun going back to chch it was a bite fun there. And then on Monday went out for breakfast I like it. It was in town.
Thank you for reading my blog post. Can you please comment on it? Have a great day at school or at home. Bye!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteI like you story but you need to remember to make sure it make sense. I liked how you were including other people and staying to the story. But remember for your punctuation. Bye
Thank you Quaid i will did that. I will do it in my next blog. Bye
DeleteHi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteYour weekend sounds really fun! Make sure to check your punctuation, maybe re - read your sentences to see if they make sense and check your capital letters.
I liked how you used a capital letter for people's name.
Looking forward to your reply.
-Susie
thanks Susie the same idea I will do it. Bye
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