Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my free writing. It is about a van explosion. I did this because I didn't bring my toys today.
Here is my Free Writing.
Free Writing
There was an explosion in a van. CRASH! The people were bleeding because there was an explosion in the van and people had to go to the hospital. It was terrifying. The fire engine and police helped the kids. The mum and dad were crying because they were hurt and worried.
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