Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my writing. We are learning to Write in past-progressive tense Use powerful action verbs Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
Here it is my Writing.
“No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream. Tasting like salt was disgusting. I drunk salt water as the waves were splashing on my face.The sand was going in my eyes. I can hear people talking. I can hear people swimming in the water.I can hear my dog splashing in the water. I can hear my dog barking at a another dog. I was sniffing the air for food ice cream, chips and some hot dogs.
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