HI Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my writing about what I am going to do when I grow up. We are learning to do be fluent writers write about ourselves and quickly organise our writing.
Here is my Writing.
What do you want to be when I grow up and why?
Hair Dresser.
I went to the hair Dresser and I watch them when they where doing my hair. They put water in my hair so my hair can go soft when they brush my hair it is soft. And them they cut my hair what my mum told them to. And they didn’t wash was my hair before.
I have a question have you had a bad hair cut before?
Thank you for reading my blog post. Can you please comment on it? Have a great day at school or at home. Bye!!!!!!!!!!
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