Hi Everyone,
Today I am going to be showing you my Writing. We are learning to explode moments in our writing provide as much detail as possible use strong ideas when writing.
Here is my Writing.
Event: Thunderstorm at Zone.
Moment: Coming back to school when it was a thunderstorm on a zone day. It stops raining I didn’t get hit by the thunderstorm. And when I got on the bus I saw light from the thunderstorm and it was raining at the same time. And then we had to go to the gym. And after we went to the gym the rain was going very fast like a cat. We all had to run back to class.
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